城乡差距英语注册送体验金的娱乐网站:Rural-urban Disparity


  城乡差距英语注册送体验金的娱乐网站:Rural-urban Disparity

  原创: 栗佳

  People’s living standards have improved greatly because of economic development in recent years, but it has also brought about the problem of rural-urban disparity based on the fact that the resources and developments of these areas are imbalanced.

  Several problems can be caused by the disparity. Firstly, as numerous young or middle-aged adults choose to migrate to cities to pursue better employment opportunities available only in urban centers, many children and elderly people are left behind and cannot get the necessary care they need, which may lead to educational problems for children and the decline of life quality for senior citizens. As a result, there might be a negative impact on social development in the long term. Besides, due to the lack of human resources, rural areas would find it more difficult to develop local economy and alleviate poverty.

  To solve these problems, the first step is to adjust the current policy. Governments should invest more in undeveloped rural areas and encourage local people to start business or establish trade relationship with other regions according to their own features and resources, which can introduce more job opportunities and generate income. At the same time, basic infrastructures in rural areas ought to be constructed, such as healthcare centers and transportation facilities. Better development expectancy would encourage labor force to flow back to revitalize local economy, thus diminishing the economic disparity between rural and urban areas.

  A harmonious society should provide all citizens with necessary social services and everyone can share the result of a country’s prosperity. The disparity between cities and rural areas is a worrying trend but it can be addressed with proper methods and policies.

  (推荐老师:郭丽君)

  作者心得

  在英语学习过程中,相比于听力和阅读,口语和写作的提升是相对困难的,一部分原因就是练习的缺乏。如果只在临考前开始对口语和写作进行突击训练,语言的输出可能就会显得捉襟见肘。不过,如果想在有限的时间里在口语和写作上取得质变,最重要的还是大量练习。以写作为例,选取好的范文材料,反复阅读揣摩作者思路、表达、直至内化,练习多了,不知不觉间下笔就和以前不一样了。

  这篇文章是雅思注册送体验金的娱乐网站题,属于一篇报告型注册送体验金的娱乐网站(Report)。问题分为两个部分:1.问原因,2.问解决办法。个人认为这样的问题比纯粹问原因或者解决办法要相对容易一些,因为这对思维的要求没有那么高,一个问题写出一两条答案再合理拓展就可以了。

  雅思注册送体验金的娱乐网站和四六级注册送体验金的娱乐网站的一大不同在于,前者对思维和推理的要求相对高一些。四六级注册送体验金的娱乐网站往往车轱辘话反复说,语法和句式华丽可能都是加分项。但这样的套路在雅思注册送体验金的娱乐网站这里行不通,雅思注册送体验金的娱乐网站有点像是写中文的议论文,每一个原因或看法列出来,要有自己的论证,文章要有具体内容,言之无物会被一眼看穿。在这篇注册送体验金的娱乐网站里,当写到针对城乡差异所能采取的措施时,我着重强调了政府的角色功能,比如加强对不发达地区的投入,鼓励其与其他地区建立贸易关系等等,还有公共交通、医疗等基础设施建设,因为只有人们看到了经济发展的前景和希望,他们才更愿意留下来建设家乡。农村经济发展起来了,城乡差异自然就会相对缩小。段首一句写观点,后面的便是具体论述,支撑自己的观点。

  在英语学习方面,大部分时候我是快乐的,因为我觉得这是一个很有意思的过程,而且学好英语也能带来非常多的实际帮助。成就感和兴趣互相促进形成了良性循环,所以在面对自己巨大的无知时才能沉下心,低下头继续努力,以期走得更远一些。

  (作者:栗佳  文学院2016级研究生)

  教师点评

  作者在雅思考试中取得了总分8,写作7.5的高分。中国学生雅思平均写作成绩不到5.5,7.5无疑是一个令人满意的高分。在听、说、读、写四项技能中,“写”是最为棘手的,全球考生的雅思成绩也是写作为最低分,作者的写作心得值得我们深思与借鉴。

  雅思大注册送体验金的娱乐网站的评分标准有四个方面: task response (任务完成情况)、cohesion and coherence (衔接和连贯)、lexical resources ( 词汇丰富程度)和grammatical range and accuracy( 语法结构的多样性和准确性), 当然这四个方面是相互关联的,需要我们建立起正确的英语写作理念,对英语语篇结构,思维语言等有一个整体的良好把握。 正如作者所说: 雅思注册送体验金的娱乐网站比较看重思维逻辑。中文写作比较迂回,间接,而英文习惯直接清晰地阐述观点,并适当加入衔接表达使文章连贯自然。

  这是一个报告性题目。提出城乡差别这个话题,让你讨论引起的问题以及解决方案。这类题目与辩论性题目不同,不需要提供自己的立场,而是进行分析和建议。作者紧扣问题展开讨论,在第一段引出话题,提出资源和发展的不平衡导致城乡差别;第二段提出城乡差异带来的问题,作者主要侧重探讨了对农村的影响,当然也可以考虑对城市的影响, 衔接词的使用:firstly, as a result, besides...使得文章清晰连贯;第三段提出解决措施, 着重强调了政府的角色功能;最后一段总结全文,提出展望。中国学生在英文写作中往往套用模板,不清楚学术性写作的特点和标准,一味追求长难句华丽语言,造成表达混乱啰嗦,逻辑不清,而这篇文章避免了这些问题,较好地做到了reader-friendly,语言简洁,逻辑通顺,衔接流畅,论证清晰、合理,词汇句型使用丰富,灵活,显示了较为扎实的写作功底。

  考场上展示出的注册送体验金的娱乐网站实力本质上是平时努力学习的体现。万丈高楼平地起,量变才能质变,正如作者所说:“最重要的还是大量练习。以写作为例,选取好的范文材料,反复阅读揣摩作者思路、表达、直至内化,练习多了,不知不觉间下笔就和以前不一样了。”多读多写永远是提高写作的不二法门。

  (点评教师:郭丽君)

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